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Originally Posted by SEGsby
...As I was moving along with the strong, dust filled winds at my back, I noticed a young black male on a skateboard staring at me, standing under a streetlight...
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Nice writing style, but I can't for the life of me figure out why you thought it was important to add race to the story. Disturbing. I think if you left the word "black" out of the sentence, it would have been just as exciting to everyone.
Jim